Keep yah head high chica ..
i know can totally relate too what your sayen in this poem and if your actually going through this time in your life, please just keep holding on ..things do get alot better , they will always be up and down and youll always want too end your life, but on top of it all ..things get SO much better
keep ya chin up ..nd lawk after urself
i hope things gett better for you
keep up the gud wurk ..agen this poem , deserves alot more then 5 .. but i give u another 5
- Unity

Wow.. You're an amazing writer sweets. It's beautiful. It has a great flow:) Keep it up babe. *hugs*

~Jessica

Great poem Maddy... Keep up the good work girly... I feel your pain...
If this is a true story... I've been there too... All I can say is that things will get better... Keep on writing girl... Keep on writing...

You expressed yourself so very well i love this poem
you poured your very soul into this poem.wow i can be so dramatic lol but seriously this is a great poem.5/5

Aww That Was Really Sad Maddy, I Hope Your Ok Hun Because That Poem Was Awesome! I Liked It Alot *Net Hugs* I'm Always Here If You Need Me *With All My Love* 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

Amazing poem, well written, thanks for your comment.

I liked it alot, nice work
dwight

Wow this one is good too! i hate how ppl think they know how you feel! wen really they dont! well chk out my other poem plz! its not as good but it owuld mean alot! thnx!!

*KaLiN*

Aw thats a real sad poem, Hope your okay. Try not to let life get you down coz it will get bedda =D
I wrote the poem just to express how im feelin, Cause i just lost my first baby only 2 weeks ago.
Well you got some great poems, You an awsum writer, Keep it up!!
Bec xx