Comments : Falling apart

  • 15 years ago

    by Unity

    Keep yah head high chica ..
    i know can totally relate too what your sayen in this poem and if your actually going through this time in your life, please just keep holding on ..things do get alot better , they will always be up and down and youll always want too end your life, but on top of it all ..things get SO much better
    keep ya chin up ..nd lawk after urself
    i hope things gett better for you
    keep up the gud wurk ..agen this poem , deserves alot more then 5 .. but i give u another 5
    - Unity

  • 15 years ago

    by JLT

    Wow.. You're an amazing writer sweets. It's beautiful. It has a great flow:) Keep it up babe. *hugs*

    ~Jessica

  • 15 years ago

    by Blutonium Boy

    Great poem Maddy... Keep up the good work girly... I feel your pain...
    If this is a true story... I've been there too... All I can say is that things will get better... Keep on writing girl... Keep on writing...

  • 15 years ago

    by Michael Mantione

    You expressed yourself so very well i love this poem
    you poured your very soul into this poem.wow i can be so dramatic lol but seriously this is a great poem.5/5

  • Aww That Was Really Sad Maddy, I Hope Your Ok Hun Because That Poem Was Awesome! I Liked It Alot *Net Hugs* I'm Always Here If You Need Me *With All My Love* 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by Caroline

    Amazing poem, well written, thanks for your comment.

  • 14 years ago

    by dwight

    I liked it alot, nice work
    dwight

  • 14 years ago

    by sweet surprise

    Wow this one is good too! i hate how ppl think they know how you feel! wen really they dont! well chk out my other poem plz! its not as good but it owuld mean alot! thnx!!

    *KaLiN*

  • 14 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Aw thats a real sad poem, Hope your okay. Try not to let life get you down coz it will get bedda =D
    I wrote the poem just to express how im feelin, Cause i just lost my first baby only 2 weeks ago.
    Well you got some great poems, You an awsum writer, Keep it up!!
    Bec xx