Hey, nice poem, really strong emotion and really well written.

XXX CICI XXX

Aw this is so sad....great work 5/5

Wow...its so...powerful? I cant even explain it lol But its good 5/5
Becky
xoxo

Doesnt really rhyme but good nonetheless also might wanna put it into poem format just helps to read it that way

Sad..Sad..Sad..=[ Cheer up lol But I like this one too.. It's really good!! 5/5

`natalie xx