Girl u got the gift of what peoms are made of, i know u would become famouse for writing this peom, i think it speaks out for all of us who are trapped in this world alone with a cruel hearted guy. highly i think u should get rid of him, and turn ur peom into a song. good luck. im sorry to hear what happened.

;o wow, this is one of the best dark poems i've ever read hun, very expressive word & the style of the poem itself, you did a great job on this one, keep it up hun, stay sweet

My god darling you are amazing. This is a poem that came from the heart and I feel so sorry.. but I understand exactly where you are coming from....
Keep up the fantastic work,
xxxx

OMG hope ur okay i love the way u write!!!!! if u eva wanna tlk im here 4 u.....

This is is such a nice poem...nice...keep on writing.