This is a cool poem i love the mysterious kind of mood you have it in. it was really enjoyable

I really like the atomsphere you have going there..... Creep but beautiful....
Keep it up,
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Ooh I like this poem! "Blood flows down her gentle chest"
"And calls his name with all her might
Within a minute he appears by her side
And he asks her to be his vampiress bride"
I love these lines best, you have a real way with words.

I'm interested in vampires so your poem cought my attention. It's very good and if you are interested, I have some poems about vampires as well. Check them out sometime. Cheers. Mercedes