Really sool poem!! 5/5

Woah!!! cool!!! i love vampires!! this poem is totally awesome!

Hey thanks for your comments. I based my poem on the vampire books written by teen(she wrote them in her teens but she's about 21 now) author Amelia Atwater-Rhodes(In the Forest of the Night, Demon in My View, Midnight Predator). These are cool vampire books. I'd have to say Midnight Predator is the best so far. Cheers and all my best - Mercedes

I love it!!! ur poem..its so..wonderful... keep it up!! ~tiffiny~

Thanks

Wonderful poem, I really like your style alot. Great concpet. Flow and diction flawless.

Thank you for your kind comment on my latest poem...If you get chance I would really like you to check out two poems of mine dark angel part 1 and 2 Let me know what you think.

I look forward to reading more, I have entered you onto my favourites list!!

Kind regards
Hayley

Thank you Hayley for your wonderful comment. I am very flattered that you put me on your favorites list. You should know that it is always a pleasure to read your poems. Good luck and cheers. Mercedes

Thank you Hope. I will read some of your poetry. :) Cheers Mercedes

Interesting vampire poem. Well done and much better compared to my own. The diction was great.
~The Unforgiven

Thank you for your comment though I'm not that sure it was better than yours. :)

Exceptionally gothic-esque
So beautifully written.
Adore it and so creative.
I can feel the emotion behind it
5/5
Love... ADORE your work
xox- Bev

Thank you so much Beverley! I ADORE your work!
xoxxo Mercy