My Fear

by Marie   Sep 28, 2005


My fears are real
they are out there, I know
from snakes to death
they are all inside

My biggest fear is being alone
Loosing you at anytime
would tear me apart
I'd loose my mind

Your my love
my life
and friend
without you my life will end

I don't know how to tell you
I don't know what to say
Only that I'm scared to death
To live and not have you to hold!

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by XღÜñ§€€ñ¯†€ª®§ღX

    Loosing you at anytime

    **Losing you

    loose my mind

    ***Lose my mind

    Just thought that I would show you that:) Okay now that I'm done with that, I saw your thing in the requests to read and comment poems...it made me feel bad that no one returned your comments so I'll give you some:) I loved this poem-it reminded me a lot of how I feel sometimes with my boyfriend. I don't know what I'd do without him...I'd be so lost. You did a great job...keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Great job i love the feeling this gives off the first stanza was my favorite nice concept 5/5

More Poems By Marie