Thats really good writing! Keep it up, Amy x

Her life was nothing but pure HELL
but no one was there to catch her when she fell;
think u missed the hell bit./..
was a nice write
sounded much like my life
you'll know why if u could read
"murder or suicide"
good poem
it got u 5/5
love
amy

That was very good i loved the last lines very good and thanks for your comments

That pome was great . i felt every word it is exactly how i feel. i loved it . it toched me.
keep up the good work.
Emma5/5

Well written dark poem

Sad..yet cute, its very well written,

I think you can say the word HELL i dont think it would land you in explicit
but great job i think your vocab needs to be improved though

Wow, your a very good writer. i can picture a story when reading your poems. good stuff.

Wow gfreeat meaning and flow need no work i loved it keep it up