Oh thats a really good one, i liked it. great job.

WOW.. that was reli gr8.. it was reli something.. i mean, WOW.. i loved this poem, it was reli gud, the words, the flow, and the rhyme, and especially the rhyme... ur hard work finally paid off.. i hope that didnt reli happen, and if it did, im sorry..
u noe, this was so gud, im gonna add u to my faves so it wud be easier 4 me to access this poem .. and i lyk ur title, too
keep up the talent
take care

Hey man...
just wanna say I like your poem. Really unique and cool! Nice job and keep it up 5/5 ^_^ take care.

This is wonderful! And the last stanza was excellant! Keep it up!

Great poem. its flows really well and the rhyming is nie on perfect