I really liked your poem, keep it up. 5 points all the way. =)
Taty

Your stuff is really amazing.. youve got a real talent...

W0w... this is a really great poem... and it is so true!! you have some real talent so keep it up!!! 5/5 i loved it!

I love the way you end your poems...you really know how to hit a nerve.
I thought the flow was good, but I think you have done better.
However, it was still pretty good!