Wiat, duckie! travis died!?!? labiche? the kinda freakish guy that u liked?!?!? i dont wanna freak out til i know so email me and tell me whats going on plzzzzz! i knew him... i sat next to him freshman yr in english class... i read all his journals and stuff like that everyday!!! akk
good poem tho btw
hannah/boo

Amazing poem. very well written. i really like the way you set it up. great job!
crystal

That was very sad but nicely written 5/5

Wow. great poem i loved everyline i can feel every emotion.
Emma 5/5

I'm sure this sweet flowing poem is also a fine tribute to trav as well as a release of confined emotion. at least it touched my heart great job

Amazing job i am sorry for your loss. it's the hardest thing we people have to deal with i do hope you ok and i do hope you make it through he would want you to.

Whew! im so happy that courtney is ok! ive been thinking about her so much! lol :D!!! lol
duckie, email me thru my profile and tell ur number so i can talk to you!!!! lol

Awwww wow. this is very sad and emotional. i like the way you rhymed your poem... its different.
oh yea you spelled alone wrong. but yea 5/5!

Great poem im really sorry if this happened to you only things

Sleepless days and painful nights,

i think it should be flip flopped...painful days and sleepless night
*days are usually sleepless anyways*

great job 5/5

Only mistakes were that "alone" and "though" werent spelled right, but no big deal.
The poem was sorrowful and deep. Im very sorry that you had to lose someone, I have lost people too, but you have to stay strong, its the only way.

Good Writing!
beth

Wow really great poem here to tell ya the truth i picked up my guitar the 3rd time i read thru this and started to strum a melody out for it i just am blown away by it no work needed at all
its heart felt and i can relate to it so much

This is an outstansing piece of work for a luctuous event. I hope you are fine, and that time will heal this pain you feel. Anyways, the poem is truly fantastic, and full of poetic devices and an efficient structure which help to develop meaning. Very well done. Impressive poem.

Hey, yeah... travis is definetly in my german class... lmao... hes ok, just in case u didnt kno already...
Hannah

Oh, you poor thing. =( I know exactly how you feel to lose someone so young, but so close. My friend's dad died at the age of 38 (sorta old, but still young for the life expectancy), and he acted like my dad. He was perfect. And you really brought that emotion out of me again. =(

Anyways...The poem was great. The flow was a little off in places, but what can you do, right? I liked the idea of the short verses inbetween the long ones. Great write. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

So sad, yet such a pleasure to read.
Everything flowed very well.
You have a lot of talent.

Wow im so sorry about ur lose cody