Comments : Freedom

  • 18 years ago

    by Manuel

    WAW... your style is amazing, keep writting!

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Nice poem well written.

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I THOUGHT THIS ONE WAS VERY GOOD, VERY WELL WRITTEN

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl very nice.. and i loved the inspiration brhind the poem.. very nice! 5/5. keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Okay, all insults and sarcasm aside. This poem is..well.....splendid! It truly shows how much you like Irish dancing and how much you hold it with high regards.

    My favourite stanza that pulled the whole poem together:

    "And although Im not especially good at it,
    I hold it in my heart,
    And that is enough.
    That is where all dreams start."

    Especially the last line.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Very nice! I love the last stanza; great ending! 5/5 love your work

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Very interesting.. well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    ..breathtaking.... awesome job, awesome choice of wording, i loved it, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lydia O

    I really got a warm feeling from this poem. The lines I really loved were these:
    Ive never been so free,
    So free of worries and woes,
    Feeling so special, feeling so free.

    The exuberance you describe here is contagious. :-)

    ... and thans so much for your comment on my poem "Journey on a Desert Train."

    ~~Lydia