When I'm alone

by Avrii Monrielle   Sep 30, 2005


When I'm all alone
No one else here
I am peaceful
With absolutely no fears
I pretend I'm a spirit
No one sees me
I hold myself together
And in my mind I am free
I feel myself looking at
Whatever I choose
When I'm alone
I can't win or lose
I can fall asleep
With a smile on my face
As I beat no one
I won my silent race

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Kinda reminds me of myself. i seem a lot better by myself. gr8 poem easy 2 relate 2...5/5 keep up the gr8 work

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashelin

    This is a well written poem, great flow and feeling to it.

  • 18 years ago

    by ☆Vintage Butterfly Star☆

    Nice poem, well done, i love the way you've written it. You have a talent !!

    xxx cici xxx

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