Wow... im speechless... wow... this is my new fav poem. brilliant!!!!! i absolutely L.O.V.E. it!
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Brilliant poem. really really really good. great rhyme scheme and structure. a brilliantly written poem, as well as a totally beautiful poem. so lurvely. i love it so much im talking gibberish. ^o^

Wow! very descriptivE! i can imagine myself in the poem! .... although i don't necessariliy look like that person.... anyways, i'm going off topic. thanks for commenting on one of my poems! keep up that beautiful talent! ;D 5/5

*cries* how can you write this well? its oo inspired, soo......ajust amazing. im flabberghasted. the inspiration for the poem, the imagery, the language, everything is breath taking.i think this is my favourite of your poems soo far.
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