Comments : Never ending fairy tales never comes true

  • 20 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    Beautiful...im speechless it spp wonderfully written..alot of emotion a feelings i like it alot..5/5

    -angel-

  • 20 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    LOST HOPE
    GREAT POEM 5/5 IT'S ONE OF THE BEST POEM I HAVE READ! THANK YOU FOR SHARING. ^_^ TAKE CARE

  • 20 years ago

    by chavii

    Thats very touching poem .

    --chavii--

  • 20 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written. 5/5 none to less.
    Keep writing and take care [always]

    xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 20 years ago

    by Polly

    Its so good. its so deep in such a unique way. wow. keep it up
    xxx

  • 20 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Good job !!

    i like it !!

    very well done !

    5?%

  • 20 years ago

    by Spitfire

    5/5

  • 20 years ago

    by BrokenTessa

    Hey, that was great, your truly progressing in your writing skills. but the part that i particullarly liked was...

    i believed in love, believed in fate,but time for love it too rare to wait,

    and...

    Its shown by the way you have my heart,
    But never again will tear it apart.

    but i think that it would be a little bit better if you changed it too...

    but never again will YOU tare it apart.

    but anyway, keep writing your doing great.
    *keep smiling*
    `~*Tessa*~`

  • 20 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I think fairy tales do come true, if you are able to be with your love ones till death, but Never Ending? Ya, i don't think so...