I loved reading it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Do you see that...you ask nicely for people to rate and comment and do they...no, selfish people, lol. firstly, thanks for commenting on my poem with a poem, lol. secondly, wow, it was great. i especially like the fourth stanzer. your poem had passion and depth, keep it up, and read, vote and comment on some of mine please...even try some of the unvoted and uncommented if you want/i want u 2, lol.
brad

p.s. since you put my poem as 5/5, does dat mean im on your favorites list?

It was very deep and it was really good

DEEP DEEP DEEP i I LOVED THE LAST
PART THE MOST CY