That made me ssshiver.....that was really sad. a great poem with sooo much feeling.

This is like (sob) so sad. Really. Very touching, and it rhymes amazingly.

Omg that is so sad i wanna cry :( great poem though better then mine i did about me bein a weirdo lolz newayz hope ur ok aswell

LUB SCIANISH CORINNE:D

Wow BJ, awsome poem. I loved it. Remember if you ever need to talk iam here for you. my email is rocky4215@gmail.com so you can email me if you have to talk, or most of the time iam in the chat. well, loved the poem, and keep writting.

Love ya
~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

Wow... ur an amazing writer... keep ur chin up hun ur gorgeous
check out mine sometime
luv always smiling
oxoxo

That is an excellent poem. i really enjoyed it. it was sad though...and i hope your ok. stay strong and keep up the good work! :-)

I think its really good! i like it

I think its really good! i like it

I think its really good! i like it

I think its really good! i like it

Ohhh its soo sad!!! really good though the flows very nice

Wow BJ ,
that was sooo sad, and so real, i loved it keep it up hunni..
and know that im here for you too
love your best bud
Ashley

WOW great **claps**
it made me cry
i always thought you worte better than me loved it lots
thanks for everything! *HUGS*

Really sad but you only you could of made it so gd your talent shows no end keep ya head up hun xxxliltxxx 5/5

Wow, that was so gud. 5/5. keep up gud work bj. huggles ya

This is Great hunni , really really good, ure a great writer and deserve more awards! . This poem is so touching and has so much feeling its brillent!
~ luv ya Crystal ~

Good poem the rhymes were exact flow was good...basic rhymes though, good story though im very sorry if this happened to you and great job having the courage to write about it if it is if its fake then good job for story making skills 5/5

OMG Girl, this poem is sad, and happy all at the same time. I love it

I would like to suggest....it would probably help to choose less predictable [rhyming] words....it kind of ruins the flow when th reader can expect what words you haven't even used yet.
Good message, powerful piece.
Christa

I reli lykd this poem.. the topic was gud and ur choice of words was gud, too.. however, i kinda felt it was 'on the surface'.. tho it is a very deep and heart-breaking topic.. i gez im jus a lil down these days..(sorry :$) i reli lykd ur last two lines..
keep up the gud work
Nannoush