Wow, that is an amazing poem. i absolutly love it. there was one line that threw off the flow a little bit
"Shapes or it breaks a great person in half"
i think it would flow a little better if you put:
"It shapes or it breaks a great person in half"
but other than that it really was an amazing poem. great job!
crystal

Again, i really liked this, it's well written and i love the messages written into it.

'There is beauty in the darkness of depression
In these times we can find lifes greatest lessons'

I especially liked these two lines, i think there's a lot of depth in them.

xxx cici xxx

This was a great poem, i only have to say one thing, it was kinda hard to read, becaue the flow was choppy, i think i might be able to help...
ok..heres a little tip, when u read poetry, there are things called, pauses or breaks, and when u read those, its like...started the line over again, so at those pauses and breaks, start a new line! for example:

"...There is beauty
in the untamed soul
Full of purpose
yet knows this great hole
There is beauty
in the pain of the past..."

I hope that helps!

I really did love the emotion u put into this poem tho, and hopefully i was of help! :) i gave this a 5/5

Overall a very good poem but like some of the others said it has a small problem with the flow ... personaly i genrally dont have a problem with that but in this piece it really seems to slow it down

Nice poem 5/5

This poem is truly full of mystical wisdom. I love it