Im Not There

by Karii;*   Oct 2, 2005


Thinking of you, makes it hard to breathe,
just the sound of your name makes my heart skip a beat,
why did you make me like this, if you were just going to leave,
when your wondering who loves you,
remember it will alwayz be me,
but i want you to know,
that you had me in tears,
but i doubt you would care,
i dont even know y i bother talking to you,
besacuse to you im not even there*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Celina

    Nice it is ver personal! and can be realted to lots of ppl at the same time I like that

  • 18 years ago

    by Fluffy Cotton

    Short but well constructed. Your form of writing is unique but it works for you. I like your style of rhyming too. It's like it snuck up on me. Weird, I know v.v; but it's true. Impressive poem! Your uniqueness is a talent covetted by poets. Don't let it go to waste C: I sure hope to see more from you.

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