Omg that is so good man u should keep writing

OMG thats a really good poem i thrt it was really good

LUV lj

Hey, i really loved this, it's really well written. I like the way you've written the last two lines, i think they're powerful cos they stand out.

xxx cici xxx

Good job

im cold so i cant type that much

i really like it
it has a llot of emotion!
GREATJOB !
5/5

WOW!! that rocks!!!!

luv ya
ambika xxx

Rik,
Wow boy, Great poem! :-) Nice job and always keep it up. Just checking out your poetry! 5/5 Oh yeah...how about a Dutch poem? (j/k) Take care my friend

Very interesting piece. It really kept my attention all the way through and it flowed very well. Keep it up~Holly

That was really good you did a great job on it!