Comments : Alone and lost...

  • 18 years ago

    by XnotaprettygirlX

    I'm here for you..i may not be physically with you but i am here for you...if you reach for my hand i'll grab it(in a non lesbian way)..and then me and you can get through this cold dark lonliness together...

    great poem by the way

    -angel-
    and i think you were meant to say
    ~AnOtHeR fAbUlOuS pOeM~...you know its true..:P

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Omg, i loved this it was excellent xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by TeArS R FaLLiNg

    Hey just wanted to say thankyou for the comment, you have no idea how much it means..its so weird that someone that i dont really know wants to help, but the people i am supposedly close to turn a blind eye!!! it sucks hey!!! i will be okay, ive been putting up with it for ages and that parts of my problem-tht i dont open up and talk-caz it hurts too much but i appreciate your kindness it means alot, email me if youre allowed xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Aw hun, its good, but somethings off and i cant put my finger on it, maybe play with the format and wording? but either way 4.5/5:) awesome work.

    Thankyou so much for the mention your a sweetie! keep up the great work

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by B4BY BLU3 X

    Arrr this was well good, I liked it a lot. Took me a while to read it all but got there in the end lol! Well done

    Peace xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Good poem.Really felt the emotion.and it isn't ridiculous.