Holy crap i love this poem!
5..5..5...5..5! if it could be it would be a ten i love it!

That ois the bets poem ever Matt!!!! love it soooo much!!!

I'm not a big fan of the 2 by 2 rhyming thing people do, like when every 2 lines rhyme, i just don't think it builds the effect and it sounds a little annoying

Its really good. Awsomely cool. Keep writing!

Wow this is great
absolutely love it just like suzie
but maybe not the same way
anyway keep it up
Ive read some of my other comments and they seem really harsh
sorry about my epithetic ways
great poem (again)
Em

Brilliant peice, truly very well written.

5/5

Wow, that was really deep, and sad, also very good, 5/5
Luv Helen xxx

I likeded it, it was awsome, 6/5, awsome....i guess....keep up the exallent work, i hope to read more right now, but i dont have time, i will read more!! defanitly (sp)

It's sad, but i still love it. :)

Very unusual poem, but I enjoy your references to rainbows crying. That is so original and neat! It was a neat poem overall and it did carry a sad, sorrowful feel to it. As regards the comment you left on my contest, I made an apology to the contestants I disqualified. I wish I had given them a chance to change their poems, too....I will definitely view it as a learning experience towards the contest. Thank you for your input.
Charisma*

AMAZING! It shows confusion that many people feel. I love it.. i'm sure many people can realte to this. alls i can say is awesome!