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Well done as usual. 5/5
My fav verse was:
I will lay out the bed
Creating a wonderful place by the fire
A soft pillow for your head
A bottle of wine to fuel the desire

Beautiful and touching

Bill,
Here I am...as always, reading your poems. This poem's just so beautiful and touching ^_^ Great job and can't wait to read more...you have a very unique way! 5/5 Take care and keep it up

I love the opening lines. Comparing your love to rain, breathtaking! A passionate piece full of love, well done~Holly

Very romantic!! I love how you started this one:

The rain falls like tears of love
As the dark skies shower our life today
The rain, like our love, sent from above
My love, come out and play

You have a way with words, my friend. Lovely write.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela