Comments : Come Back...

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    I like your repitition of the last lines of each stanza. They don't sound forced and fit into the poem really nicely.

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥LaUrEn♥

    Awwwwww.....i love this poem i reminds me of my ex!!and how i felt when he left me!

  • 17 years ago

    by Amanda

    I can definately feel how you want your readers to feel :o)