by Ariana
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I like your repitition of the last lines of each stanza. They don't sound forced and fit into the poem really nicely. |
by ♥LaUrEn♥
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Awwwwww.....i love this poem i reminds me of my ex!!and how i felt when he left me! |
by Amanda
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I can definately feel how you want your readers to feel :o) |