Comments : Immortal

  • 18 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Great flow and imagery

  • 18 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Wow fransico!
    wonderfully written....i loved every word and the rhyming. You have true talent, keep up the great work. check out some of my poems whenver u have time:)

    xxxxxxbeautifulxxxxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by kate

    Awwthats well sweet a bit sad but amazingly written well done i love it well done

  • Hey great poem , nice choie of words . Keep up the great work u get a 5/5/ from me =D

  • 18 years ago

    by Hannah

    Its really amazingly good!! well done 5/5. keep on writing!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Dahna

    Uncanny flow, perfect feeling, beautiful vibe, all enough to bring tears to any eye.