This is a really good poem and i sry to hear about ur dad.

Aww. That was sooo sweet. Sry to hear about your dad but.... wow! That was great 5/5!

Wow. I think that is wonderful. I'm so sorry about your dad. You captured a beautiful picture through your poem, though. Take care.
> Kiesha

I loved ur poem.SORRY BOUT UR DAD.i know how u must fell it was a great poem with such a great picture it creates. loved ur poem it was really good

I'm sry bout ur dad. Keep up the good work. I love all your poems.

My heart goes out to you. How proud your Dad must be of your poem. This is very well written and your love for him is so obvious

Ur poem was brillent, it brought a tear 2my eye (no joke), sry bout ur dad, bt ur a rely gud poet keep it up x x x x kylie x x x x