Comments : Fall Day Dreamin

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Reading this was like taking a beautiful journey! I really enjoyed the twist in the middle, very creative! Beautifully conveyed as always~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Truly beautiful...I'm speechless....

    hugs, love, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Oh you had me so wrapped up in this one and then wham, why did you wake up???? lol But seriously, its beautiful, I love how you wrote this one.

    Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nice, wonderful poem Bill!!!