Wow... that's all i can say.. that was awe inspiring... keep it up!

Aww...this was a cute poem...you really brought out what we all are really missing when we just stay inside. It actually made me go outside and look at all the changes! Keep up the good work~Rach

Pete,

Your words painted a picture perfect scene of Autumn and it is such a serene and calming piece. Perfect!

Regards,

Steve

You brought back many memories with this write. I could actually smell the crisp air around me along with the grass, popcorn, cotton candy, pizza and fried dough. I can see the colors and hear the kids laughing and yelling and having fun on the rides at the fair.... I miss jumping into the piles of raked leaves and having them stuck to your clothes and hair. Ahhh Peter, you have painted such a beautiful picture with your words...... I love this write.