Comments : Reaching Serenity

  • 14 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Well that was very cool. The ending was cool and a little unexpected.

  • 14 years ago

    by JodiieBaybeh

    Great poem really good !

  • 14 years ago

    by .Just Jessie.

    Aww... that was awesome,,,

  • 14 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Wow ..... You are a great poet. This is amazing. I really feel the inspiration in this one.


  • 14 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished excellent as alwayz!..

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenna

    This is so excellent and it's very uplifting, I love it! Wonderful work!

  • 14 years ago

    by })I({FlutterBye-Kisses})I({

    Brilliant! That's a very nice poem.

    I like how you've used the poem as a way to give advice to people and tell them that no one's perfect, that they should just be happy with themselves.

    I think it's really important for people to have such poems out there, that they can read and enjoy as well as learn from. It beats getting lectured by friends and family, that's for sure!

    The ending too is a nice touch, especially the line, "But with a real smile, walks out the door." What a beautiful ending!

    Great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by Stephy

    Wow beautiful and powerful...
    I simply loved every many girls need to realize everything you said...
    AWSOME poem...-xxx-!

  • 14 years ago

    by Brokeback

    Ver deep and so beautiful ! x

  • 13 years ago

    by eveofcoleman

    This is amazing....i love the very last lines because it goes so well witht eh rest of the poem and jsut in whoel a really good story kept me reading all the way through and was very interesting...

    um in only have three or four of mine up...but um if ya get a chance can u comment them?

  • 13 years ago

    by Vane

    OmG!.!.! i feel like the girl in this poem ...and reading this poem has helped me a gfreat deal!!! THanx a lot...if u can read some of my poems

  • 13 years ago

    by MorbidCupcake

    Wow this poem has lots of true words we should all live by! Great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Kaila

    Woah intense I loved it

  • 10 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Very inspiring and well written...5/5