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by Momentary Relapse
Well that was very cool. The ending was cool and a little unexpected.
Great poem really good !
by .Just Jessie.
Aww... that was awesome,,,
by Rican Chemistry
Wow ..... You are a great poet. This is amazing. I really feel the inspiration in this one.
..as excellent as alwayz!..
This is so excellent and it's very uplifting, I love it! Wonderful work!
Brilliant! That's a very nice poem.
I like how you've used the poem as a way to give advice to people and tell them that no one's perfect, that they should just be happy with themselves.
I think it's really important for people to have such poems out there, that they can read and enjoy as well as learn from. It beats getting lectured by friends and family, that's for sure!
The ending too is a nice touch, especially the line, "But with a real smile, walks out the door." What a beautiful ending!
Wow beautiful and powerful...
I simply loved every word...so many girls need to realize everything you said...
Ver deep and so beautiful ! x
This is amazing....i love the very last lines because it goes so well witht eh rest of the poem and jsut in whoel a really good story kept me reading all the way through and was very interesting...
um in only have three or four of mine up...but um if ya get a chance can u comment them?
OmG!.!.! i feel like the girl in this poem ...and reading this poem has helped me a gfreat deal!!! THanx a lot...if u can read some of my poems
Wow this poem has lots of true words we should all live by! Great job!
Woah intense I loved it
Very inspiring and well written...5/5