Its ok kinda short though but thats not always a bad thing. plz read and comment sum of mine.

First of all...welcome to this site...you know...that's many great poets here...why don't you check their works...it will help you a lot...

Anyway...i love it....you know poems are not started long...even four lines...can be a poem...so dont' worry(didn't think you will)...just keep up your great work...okey...