Passionately written! I love how the hope and love comes to a crashing halt with your last lines! Brutally honest....I really admire that~Holly

Comment sent by ELIZABETH T.

At the park again, I like it. I like it a lot, especially the last line when it says, "I know this can only end badly". I mean I like the way you open this poem with rapture but then bring it down to truth.But sometimes we just can't help ourselves.And maybe you are wrong and this will be the time for you two.

Love, Elizabeth