Ggod piece of work with real thought gone into it. please read some of mine. don't forget to vote and comment, thanks
Brad

Hey Atomic. You didn't do this poem justice on the way to school this morning. I loved the whole thing! You're a better writer than you give yourself credit for!

~Anthony

Ahh your great you make your words flow so well and your rhymes are mostly right on this a great idea with kick a.s.s title i like the title alot lol but great job great vocab as well 5/5

Hey, nice. I've got to like the feeling and the topic!

Good Writing!
beth

Wow, not this is my kind of poem. Very flowery words, great descriptions. Thanks for your comments

This was awe-inspiring. Its something I know EVERYONE on here can relate to and I think you just conveyed that emotion we all feel but cant really express SO well. Im really in awe at how you managed that. It was just perfectly thought out and sculpted into a beautiful piece of writing. Very nicely done!

Atomic... look into your soul. Focus on yourself...... Do you love you? Do you think you are smart? Do you think you are smart enough to know I'm bullshitting? LOL I love this poem. Everytime I read it its like..... AHHH!! I love it!

~Anthony

A poem we'll all agree with :)
This is good and easy to read with the structure and rhythm. It shows your love of writing beautifully. Well done. Thanks for sharing x

You are an amazing writer.

5/5 I love your work, keep on writing :)

Saiya

Wooooowwwwww. Another poem that is beyond perfection. nicely chosen words, and images, and all of that! You are a real professional!

No complaints on this one, a solid write that gets a 5 from me.

So tru so tru...gr8 again..suprise suprise...not...lol always good.

~*Who Cares?*~

That is so true. i love reading poems about...wel... poetry! lol. 5/5

Hey you,
awesome stuff you have here. I couldn't read the first 3 poems, because the were (love poems) and at work, it blocks it off cuz it thinks its a 'dating' thing. don't worry, when I get home, I will read more :D

Wonderful. it expresses what so many of us feel wehn we start writing.... the poem has a good solid structure, and none of the rhymes seem at all forced. *applaudes*

Ruby

Dang ur good!!! i hope you keep writing.. ur definitely good at what your doing! if you could check out my poem called our youth... i think you might like it... its pretty good even if i do say so myself...
amanda

Wow this expressed so much and was an excellent read keep it up atomic !!