It feels that way...but it isn't...and don't give up, you can't give up. Love happens when you least expect it, and it'll happen one day with someone who won't leave you unrequited. I'm just...sorry.

xxxx

It seems as though your poems are merely based on emotions, something I am not able to do as of yet.

The only thing I can suggest you do is, don't abbreviate the "why"s into "y". This is poety, not a chatline, formality is necessary.

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