Oh wow, that was really well written and very descriptive! i love poems that have anything to do with storms, and rain, as i love rain in general, but you seemed to portray it very well! definately keep up the great writing.. check out some of my poems if you get a chance! *hugs*

Snaaaaaaaaaaaaaail!!!!!!

This poem scares me...It's very sad
The poor ickle snail....Is he all alone?
Does he have a wife and kids?
Because he sounds like a pretty snail!! :D

Baby i think we should by a moosive snail as our pet hehe
I love u loads n loads n loads
more than u will ever know
love u sunshine xxxxxxxxxxxxx

Aw poor snail
he's just so alone!!!

Lol awww hunny... i love this poem so much i think it is so good but i can't get over the image of u in my head reading it to me that time last week in t2!! it was so funny! hahahaha love u dudette loads mwah xxxx