Very nice poem.You did a really good job.Need to write more like this. I especially like the lines,

"Many people around you are in relationships
yet your alone eating potato chips"

Very cool lines.Well lataz

Good poem your a good writer and a rhymer keep up the good work love maui

Hey this was a really good peom n it rhymes wel to...n thnks for yr comment

I love it....you are so cool...really...cool...

Hey, man i really liked that one! i liked the word choice! nice job
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love;heather