This is soo incredibly true! I can't ever seem to get my own feelings out...I'm a bit envious! Great job! 5/5 for you!

Great wrk i loved it:) keep it up

Wonderfully written, has a unique feel to it, that of a inner thought process. Masterfully described.

Tim ...
That is such a sad poem ...I think we are all our worst enemies and critiques .. Don't be so hard on yourself ..
* Big Hugs *

Well written. Seems we are all our own worst enemy...good job.

Great one definatly

Loved this.
definate 5 from me!

I thought you done a great job on this one...words that are so true for all of us...because we can be our own worst enemy at times...great job...

hugs, love, Ann

Great writing. Very powerful words..well done!

That was a great poem. It flowed well, I almost wish I wrote it myself. Keep it up! --Namida