Good poem sweets. I'm glad i got to talk to you again. Keep up the good work babe *hugs*

~Jessica

Omg that is a gr8 poem....!!! u have a fabulous gift..i hope u use it throughout ur life...wow...i totally no how u feel...blieve me!
~*Who Cares?*~

This was an awesome poem i really know how you feel on this one, but on this stanza

My friends say forget him,
Hes to good for you,
Tof find someone better,
Find someone new,

when you said he's too good for you did you mean your too good for him? cause i mean if you didnt the next line needs to be changed cause it contradicts it so yeah thats all though 5/5 for sure

What a sad but beautiful poem
very well written
a definite 5/5
xoxoxox
~*MaRy*~

I love how the poem shows the emotions behind it.. very well written.. 5/5