So far from touch

by BloodScars   Oct 5, 2005


Mixed emotions of head and heart
so far from the touch
yet so close to loving everything
its not working, its so easy to say

your the best person, i can find
you might not be popular
but i cant let go, i just cant choose
my head was overtaking my heart
but now i just wish it didn't

i want you more than anything
yet your so far away
your with me so close
yet you set yourself so far away

to close your eyes
and know whats right
am i who you want
or to let go of me

i know i was wrong
but i want you to know
i didn't let go of faith
i held on just for you

you made me look like a freak
just of thinking of you so much
i feel so bad, but i want you to do
what you want to do

we both knew things went right
but it wasn't this wrong
theres no other guy
theres just you and i want it that way

to know who i am
you would understand what I'm doing
but you don't deserve me-
you deserve better

even if you didn't like me from the start
i like you enough to admit i was wrong
enough to make myself look like a fool
all because of you, who you are

some people say i can do better
yet others say you can do better
i guess that evens out
but i don't know what to do

i cant say i love you
when its been so short
but i hope you know
i was wrong, and you have the right

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Excellent job. some suggestions
    The first two lines of all your stanzas are have pretty good flow.
    Try:
    you're the best person, i can find
    you might not be popular
    but i cant let go, i just cant choose
    mind, overtaking my heart

    ~and get rid of the last line of that stanza

  • 18 years ago

    by Keri

    Really nice read i enjoyed it alot. i gave it a 5

    Tc xx