Oh wow, this makes such a beautiful image in my mind, I simple love this poem of yours.

Great poem as always...nice job my friend! Keep it up and thanks for sharing, your poems are all great 5/5 ^_^ Take care and I'll be checking out some more of your poems soon!

I see the next william shakespeare...man...you are amazing...if you publish your poem...i'm definitely going to buy it...do you?

0mh great use 0f w0rds. s0me really intresting 0nes in there. such a captivating p0em. very well written! great j0b. s0 p0werful n t0uching 0nce again!