A poem to say goodbye

by ShadowDancer   Oct 7, 2005


You told me that you loved me
You told me that you cared
But all this pain you've put me through
It's more then I can bare

All the lies, all the tears
The things you tried to do
The rumours spread, the things you said
I never thought it of you

So now I guess its over,
And I have to say I'm glad
Because, you see, what you did to me
Made me feel so alone and sad

And the reason I am writing this
Is to help you understand
That its not right to make friends fight
To lie, to play a false hand

But as I say goodbye to you
In my heart I feel a pain
You were with me through so much
But I won't take your abuse again

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Wow. That was a really heart (something, wrenching maybe?) Poem. Your best so far I have to say - I loved it! Keep up awesome work like this.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona Al

    *holds back a tear* OMG sweetie thats so sad, thats a great poem. I hope ur not feeling like that anymore I hope right now that ur strong and remember that a experience of pain should teach u how to be strong not bring u down and it seems u expressed that ur now stronger and that u wont let that take u down...great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    Once again a very well ritin poem...still keep it up...great job!!!
    rates 5**
    meg

  • 18 years ago

    by Tisha

    I can relate to this poem... strong message and to the point...excellent job

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