This isn't you

by FlowerThatDied   Oct 7, 2005


So much anger built into your one fear,
I've tried to show you, yet still I shed a tear,
For your losing who you are bit by bit,
Is it my heart your trying to split
Cutting away everything I've ever known,
This isn't you, isn't who you've shown,
Its washing away day by day,
And still your girl doesn't notice yet here I stay,
I've tried so hard to make it clear,
That me, no longer you need to fear,
You must not worry, must not cry,
Someone noticed though they said goodbye.
I'm in the corner sitting alone,
Used to be the one you'd always known,
The one you cared for and adored,
And now I'm dying on the floor,
Yet you fail to notice, you fail to see,
All the pain this is causing me.
Its washing away day by day,
And still your girl doesn't notice yet here I stay,
I've tried so hard to make it clear,
That me, no longer you need to fear,
You must not worry, must not cry,
Someone noticed though they said goodbye.
I noticed I still care,
I swear to you I'll always be there,
When you fall I'll help you stand,
I'll hold you, take my hand,
Your never alone though its what you see,
For the one who'll truly be there, thats me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenTessa

    Wow, that is pretty good, It always helps ppl to know that they are cared for.Usually helps. I like the end the most, and.. Yet you fail to notice, you fail to see, All the pain this is causing me.
    well thats dope
    keep writing 'n'
    *keep smiling*
    `~*Tessa*~`

  • 18 years ago

    by Tylur

    This is such a good poem, i really love it xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Spitfire

    Great job !!

    i have a couppel new ones if u want to look at them!!

    GREAT JOB !!!

    I LOVE IT !
    5/5