A short and sweet poem but you portrayed great detail.
A nicely written piece.
Well done and goodluck to you and your writings.

Thank you both, i was going for imagery. i wasnt sure how it would turn out though, but im glad you enjoyed it.

It was really good and it just painted picture in ur mind, its really good, keep writing!

well done
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Hey i really liked it and i also really like nature so i really appreciated this poem!!!

Hmm...There was imagery of nature within each verse that smoothly flowed together. Nicely and very well done. Great job.
~Disturbed Unknown

Thanks. I'm glad you all enjoyed it. JL

Wow, brilliant poem, such amazing descriptions, well done xxxx

"wolves head out on a quest "

as u might have guessed thats my fav part! but i loved the whole poem it was wonderful how u described a new day of life with the creatures of earth.
thx for comments on my poems! keep up ur awesum poems!
weepingwolf