Once again very nice poem.

Very good. Good part about tupac's death. Hope to read more soon.

Hi!!

I must say that this was a great poem, so just keep it and all the best forever...Nitin Mongia

Great poem.
I like how you repeated the first line.
It makes it more powerful.
Im sorry you miss your brother.

-Love Always
---Kristy

I really liked your poem very sad your a great writer and i like your stuff