Dont hope! Take action. Love wont grow unless u make it grow with the proper care. Things dont just happen, you must make them happen. Hope after uve done everything, that it will work out.. not before it has even begun. :) Good job though.

Ana*

I love your poem.. it has a lot of feelings in it!!! love it keep it up !!!

OMG, I think this poem is my favorite out of all the one's you've written! It's very well-written! Good job! BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!! My favorite stanza was:

"If it's not love, what can it be?
What's going on inside of me?
You're in my dreams and in my sight.
I think about you day and night."

Very well done!

~BJ~

That was so lovely, youre really sweet, tell her! tell her!

That was so lovely, youre really sweet, tell her! tell her!

Awww this poem is really good. keep up the good work.

I like this one, maybe work the last line a bit perhaps use the word show instead of grow, but the rest is good.

Awww I love this poem, I like how it flows.

I like this....im going through it right now!! keep it up. nice work!! -k-

Wow 5/5 good job