Wow Chiquita,
this is a great poem...just what I was looking for today! Nice job, really sweet and nice. 5/5 take care and keep it up!

That was really good!!! is it like wots happening in your life? so good. taking stuff from life to make it more real. !

Again, very clever and to the point. We can't deceive our own heart/s can we.

I thought that poem was very good .. I like your style ...Keep up the great work..Also thanks for commenting on my poem...
Tisha

Hey i finally got to read your comment thanks... well i love the poem it was great!!! it reminded me of my life and this guy i love..my first love and my ex..dont you just hate to see the one you love with someone else and its so hard to think that you could ever be with someone else and think that theres no one better but then you end up finding the one that wins over your heart and STILL makes you think of EVERYTHING that you and your ex (luke..for you) did and it just hurts doesnt it... well send me a message sometime...heres my aim...ilovemeaonie@aol.com or indepndentgrl15@aol.com..thanks again great poem

5/5 good poem well written my favorite of yours