That was really deep.. i liked it. especially the end, it fit so well.
check out some of my poems if you get a chance.
stay strong and keep up the good work!

I love it , i wish i could write this good

5/5 from me

I love it, seriously its my favorite one so far...ok if only it wasnt all true but you know the poem is good!:P luv ya!

God this is a such a good poem van, I love it so much! I remember it from the bus going to soccer! You write such beautiful poetry Vanessa, i love ya!Meg

Oww this is really really good hun!!! i kinda know how u feel... and syaing it sucks is an understatement!!
luv always smiling oxoxo