That's really... descriptive. i liked it. it flowed really well. keep it up!

Aww hun, beautiful poem, you did a great job with this, very expressive and I felt like I was watching a movie while I was reading it, awesome keep it up lubb you

Nice poem, really good description and a good use of words.

Thanks for your comment on my poem, i really appreciate it.

xxx cici xxx

Very blunt I'm sorry if it's true... hmmm..... but you did a good job as a poet... trying to write something happy but feel depressed after reading that.... so you know now that your writing can affect situations and people... EXCELLENT!