Good poem...really really good:)

Omg the best I read today! 5/5!

Fantastic start to the poem :D cant wait till you finish it :D
x ally x

100/100 I liked this poem very much. I will keep reading it again and again. Each line contains deep emotional experience.
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"How come come your world's still turning
While mine is standing still...
How did you go and make this hole...
that no one else can fill?"
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"How are you sleeping soundly...
While I lie here awake...
Why are we both smiling...
but only mine is fake...
.........Real Gems, Diamonds, Gold.

I think this is my favprote poem of yours, truly tremendous, wonderful emotion, so passionate!!