Comments : Trying to get over you

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Another good one, I especially liked the line ' so I was left alone again
    to dream of yesterday' I mean its a sad line, but very well worded...

  • 18 years ago

    by Miss Megan

    I thot this and many of your otha poems where alsum..u have a talent in poetry....dont give up on this, it good get u far...you're a wonderful riter...dont stop...*rates5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Me (again)
    that was amazing your poetry is so meaningful and deep its like your taking things that happen in my life and reminding me of them again,
    thats awsome
    by the way I hope its working for you it makes things seem easier for me. . .
    :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Very touching poem. I can really relate. Very beautiful. Keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I love this one! your an amazing writer and every poem i read of your just keeps getting better and better... keep it up... i honestly enjoy reading your poetry...

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    Omg this is sooo amazing! i'm adding u to my favs. ur such a wonderful writer! i love how u expressed so many emotions, i can see everthing you wrote about, and i can hear a sad voice when i read this. this is truly beautiful. i'm adding u to my favs...did i say that?

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMemoriex

    Omg, this poem is so touching. And considering your poem ratings, you're a very talented writer! Keep it up, I'll add u to my faves =)
    Check out my poems if u like.. ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Wow, that was truely beautiful.
    I know ive already commented but here i am again.
    He doesnt deserve you! if you were with him he'd only take you for granted.
    Im not sure if your still single, but I am now and I love it.
    Dont discard what you have, but recieve what you get and know that you'll deserve it.
    I hope that didnt come out wrong but anyway
    thanks
    ~Em

  • 17 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Really powerfull and sad.. the emotions just jump off the page.. i can really relate to this one