Hey WOW that was great....
i can really relate to it to
good job on it keep it up

Wow amazing i was kinda worried for him ! lmao really good tho !

That was beautiful and hopeful for some people if they look at themsleves really close

Wow i absolutely loved that poem. Not all poems have to rythm, but you just did that wonderfully. If this is a true story, i'm sorry about that, but i guess it finishes well. Take care hun and check out some of my poems sometime:P
xoxoxoxo

Omg once again, that was really good, 5/5, keep it up