Good poem... really loved it. propz

Wow. im like. speachless. this write is just so well written i cant explain it. the use of words is great and how you put it together all flows well.

Very awesome. i love the imagery and you use of words. fantastic and haunting

Wow there was like there had to be a double meaning...it was beautiful i kept wanting to read it i was completly hooked you are a great author and i admire your artistic ability...

Keep the talent, keep the faith, keep the ability to write beautifully

-Laura

Wow. I absolutly love this poem. Great job! Keep it up!

Lovely!!! beautiful!!! breathtaking!!! unique!!! superb!!! truly wonderful!!! ... umm.... i really liked it! very descriptive and well written.

Beautiful poem. I love it!